Monday, March 20, 2017

my special place

                  My special place
                                                    by Chahat
                                                 1. About the Towers  
     2. big hospital
                                                3. Where I lived
                                                 4. The bedroom
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“WOW!” look at the tall towers, They all surrounded around  me  .One of the tower was a 15 story and one was even a 20 story it was so high ,it made me look at the sun “ouch my eyes”.The tower looked really big not like a big giant.When I walked into the tower it looked like it was just a mall.When I always go on the elevator I press the ground button  and it made me go where the carpark was . I wonder if there is a taller tower then that ?
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The hospital was big not big like a giant. Bigger than the hawke's bay hospital. With the hospital there was a playground. It had a wheel where you spin on like a hamster, Monkey bars ,the monkey bars got higher and higher . the hospital was crowded with people but it was fun . Something that I did not like about the hospital that had this little outline of a house it was made by bricks it was scary because it looked like it was going to fall on me .the elevator was weird because one end open and then the other end open it makes me go crazy.
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I lived somewhere really fun and exciting it was Ronald McDonald house . when I walked into the Ronald McDonald house it reminded me when I came there when my baby brother was going to be born . the kitchen was big it had two big fridges ,on the left side freezer and the other side of the freezer was a shared food fridges. The right fridge was your own so you bring your own food .  It has  lots of fun stuff such as desktop, toys ,playground ,table soccer , theatres, art room and an gym also a bedroom.
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The bedroom was nice and relaxing there was a single bed and a king bed under the single bed was a another bed which was the same as the single bed just lower. There was a TV beside the TV was a  soft relaxing chair beside the soft relaxing chair was a cupboard  where I put my cloths. There was a little card with a string on it so I could put it around my neck the card was for to unlock the room . when I looked out of the window I saw my car parked with the other cars . while I was looking around , I saw a book it had all the places around the motel. It was fun getting in and out of my bedroom I mean there bedroom,
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my special place is Wellington






3 comments:

  1. i liked how you put in lots of detail about it and lots of compound, complex and simple sentences
    you need to work on making your sentences make sense because i found 3 things that does not make sense two big fridges on was the freezer,there was a tv beside the tv was, and the spelling for one cloths clothes!

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  2. good job Chahat i like it in the hospital but not when i could not eat anything.

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  3. i like how you put heaps of detail in your writing

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